I didn't like the overall emotional impact. It started to decay into dreary early on. It made me uncomfortable to witness the unfolding event. The event, which in the end, was nothing more then wishful thinking. So I suggested that the character go ahead and JUMP!!!!!
Not a problem, Jack, thanks for the clarification! I just wan't quite sure what the line meant (brain's been moving a little slow lately I guess), but now I do so thanks again.
Not looking for support - looking for real. Thanks for keeping it real.
