I have posted two song sketches in the Listening area. Criticism is welcome as usual and suggestions as to what you would do with the writing of them is also welcome. Specifics especially welcome.
But also just wanted to see if anyone would be interested in taking a stab at the lyrics. Sketch 1 has a flute as the vocal line. My guess because of the range it would be for male voice.
Sketch 2, not as developed as 1, has the synth on top representing the vocal line.
Thanks for any help you offer and of course as lyricist you'd be 50% percent owner of song and publishing (if any of that is motivating for you).