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AW is very good at what they do.


Are you ?


Guess you weren't on the winners' list this week - whiners


see what happens when you hurt sensitive peoples feelings


not that it whould help you to kiss, but, think about it.



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Give a Crap

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I don't need this, or you for that matter.

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Johnny

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Maybe it's just me but I thought the main idea here was getting critiques.  I had no idea so many were seriously trying to be the weekly winner.  Wow.

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AA

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It's just you

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Coffee Anon

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Being weekly winner doesn't really get you a prize or anything but I noticed on Shayreens website that she thought it was worth throwing out there as a cred, and I tend to agree with her.  At least for now.


CA



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Johnny

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If that's the case, that everyone wants to be the winner, then there are some very disillusioned people.  Wow again.

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Jack

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I was dis-satisfied win I did not win the lottery this past weekend, but I bought a ticket anyway Johnny.

Take a look at this weeks current winner (june 24 - June 30 2006) and tell me who had a chance anyway. The NUMBER 1 AND 2 slots are the same band, different name. Not only is that an obvious lack of attention to detail, it is an obvious lack...period.

Thier IS a PC status that filters the winners list often but this week it was filtered by someones best buddies, and a lack of attention to detail.

So to satisfy little johhny come latelys undersized gray matter, AW should have NO MORE THEN 4 ENTRIES A WEEK!!!

Thats it, only four. Just get rid of all those hopefuls, who needs thier under-produced, average level, dumb-ass time absorbing jitter anyway right johnny?


I'm with you brother. only FOUR MORE TUNES...only FOUR MORE TUNES..only...idiot.

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Johnny

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Were you drinking when you read my post?  You didn't get it at all.  No wonder you're not winning.



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Jack

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I'm always drinking idiot...but clarity I aim for and seldom do I miss. You, on the other hand cannot seem to read your own font.

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ModiFY

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Gentle readers,

While I am, of course, one person, the two songs I submitted were performed at different times with different bands...Drowning Bliss and ModiFY. These are my first two songs I have posted. I didn't realize "winning" here would become an issue. I was not trying to by sly. Please let me know what the unwritten rules are for submitting songs to this site are, assuming that they differ from what is on the FAQ page.

Mod

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Jack

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It's not unwritten. You submitted them on "your" behalf, not the now defunct bands.

Which isn't the point at all. The point is that the quality of your two songs not withstanding(whatever that really menas), there were more available to fill the four slots then those two songs and the other "shoddy"(*) selections.

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http://artistweekly.activeboard.com/index.spark?forumID=81105&p=3&topicID=7541314&subForumID=245846&topicPage=1

You and/or your work is not in question here brother, the selection process is.




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Coffee Anon

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Mod-
Enjoyed both tunes, and you're a talented fellow, if the posts last week were any indication. I don't think Jack was throwing you, your songs, or your performances under the bus, although I don't know him. It seems to me that all Jack and I are pointing out is that we've been here a while, the site has deteriorated from an administrative standpoint, and we're disappointed. No reflection on you or your music. Good job and congratulations. Welcome to the Weekly Winner and Runner up club.

Johnny-you're just incoherent man. If Jack didn't understand you, he's not alone. You seem awfully bitter about something. I haven't posted anything in over a month, so I wasn't disappointed I didn't win. I didn't "Buy a ticket."
CA


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yea

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what he said Mod...I liked it...heck I'm the loud mouth that rang "we have a contender!" in the comments area of your first submitted tune. I was also the Jack that chastized ya for going twice under different names...so, no harm no foul:)


But I am dis-illusioned here , and rather then leave as a rational mind would do, I prefer to stay and stage a coup.


Jack

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Jack

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My time here may be limited.

Already we can witness the influence of insecurity measures as the ratings of "the River" by Jack will show. The flame ratings are approching 200!!!!!!!!!Have a look for yourself! In 2hours:47 minutes no less.

The flame meter police surely must know I am but a man. Please be merciful as I can in no wise surrender to the punishment that a soul must endure to get the ratings so consistantly low. I cannot utter the great words of Richard Starky, "I GOT BLISTERS ON MY FINGERS!"

Sand moves close to fill the end.

This will be my fortress area as I prepare for battle. I forsaw a sexual harrasment be thy suit laid at the feet of the pseudonym "Jack O'Brien" and laid waste the identity thief were he stood. Had I not, no security was available for the protection of an innocent man(AW knows to which I refer).

It is time for my demands to be laid out:
You will protect me and mine from these acts of theft.
You will install these measures immediately.

You will adhere to the same TOS that each one here must agree to. If you cannot do this you will MODIFY the TOS to be beneficial to both parties.


http://www.artistweekly.com/terms.jsp


And now, if you see me no more, I have been slain. Worry not for my soul, but be thy prepared. And know who it is that handles your fate.


Jack O'Brien
unabletoaccess.getadotlife.com


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btw

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"the River" is a 20+ year old song recorded on a fostex 4-trk about re-birth and the crippling affects of giving all trust to someone that may not deserve it.


Jack

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ps

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it's also about social suicide!!

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pu

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sure thing, 20 years old.. got it, but how come every time you upload a song you post an excuse for it after?  Kinda strange huh?

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Coffee Anon

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Could it be jack that you are now infamous?  Wonder now why no one knows who I am?  My coffee anon-imity has protected my work from retaliation.  As I've noted all along, most of these folks are all about free expression and beauty and love and harmony and all that other rot, until you dissagree with them.  Then they go into attack mode. 


And it's not even their music that you need be critical of to inflame their ire.  Just be critical of anything, and you become the focus of their criticism.  In their world criticism begets criticism.  You can't be critical of others and peacefully coexist. 


I think it fair to say at this point that you could post the greatest song ever written here and someone would vote it down again and again.  So maybe I lose the argument over anonimity in the long run.  Maybe this site needs to set cookies and limit votes like SR.


Naah.


Just post under a different name like Jeff Miller Jeff Elliot Miller Steve Miller Steve Austin Austin Powers Elliot Yamin, SM or Whatever JEM's name is this week.  Just leave "Jack" and "O'brien" out of it. 


CA


 



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Coffee Anon

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And what the heck is all this spam?  820-WAKE UP!  Your site's on fire!


 



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820

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Coffee - give me a break - I can clearly see that the spam is taking over.


We're just going to have to require logins to post on the forums.  Since it is a different system than the AW site itself, it will require everyone to create another account.  Yes, that's right - we are unable to implement the forums as part of our site right now, or connect the user databases to make it a seamless connection between the two.  That's one of the reasons (as well as the opportunity to be anonymous) that we set it up this way.


Now it is clear both on this forum with the anonymous drivel and cialis xxx spam that people with no soul have decided to ruin it.  So there we have it - you'll have to sign up, and that's that.


I suppose we'll have to do the same thing over at AW, since people obviously cannot handle anonymity with any sense of responsibility.


I'm sure it will make some people happy, and I'm sure it will make some people angry, but that's life, and that's what we're going to do.



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Jeffrey-ANON

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Coffee Anon wrote:
Just post under a different name like Jeff Miller Jeff Elliot Miller Steve Miller Steve Austin Austin Powers Elliot Yamin, SM or Whatever JEM's name is this week.  Just leave "Jack" and "O'brien" out of it.  CA  


Gotta get up pretty early to fool you, huh. And here I thought, I was making a vailed attempt to disquise myself. Are you making fun of me here? Do I know you from somewhere?
(You added a couple of accurate names to my list, that I haven't posted under yet.)


 Or am I so scitzo, that I don't realize that I'm really you ?



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JAck

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Coffee Anon wrote:


I think it fair to say at this point that you could post the greatest song ever written here and someone would vote it down again and again. 
CA
 




Funny you should bring that up. I listened to Delbert McClintons latest last night "Cost of Living", and wondered how it would have stood up under this crowd:) Starting about the 4th tune he would have been ripped up, "too repeatative, GAWD you call that guitar playing?, therefore I can only give you 2 out of three flames, I would have given you 2.5, well, let's just call it a 2.5..."


Anyway....didn't I mention that my real name is NOT Jack O'Brien? I'm so sorry CA, I figured you knew that I knew that the collective did not need to know who we were...or are.

Some of these puppies exert a lot of energy and time stalking someone that is a fig newton of my imagination. So you have to forgive me when I laugh:)




OK. Dear PU
"...but how come every time you upload a song you post an excuse.."

Is that capitol PU or just a little pu? Oh well.

See the difference between an alcoholic and a functioning alcoholic is an F.A. can write AND read. You are giving all the classic signs of a self-medicated dumb ass who, not only refuses to read and locate the gentle thrust of the script, but who also cannot tolerate the idea that you have no talent, you never did, you never will, you dress poorly and ...you suck as a musician.

Being that as it may, I try to be fair, even when I am being stalked, as is often the case here, and you fit the criteria.

I don't do ANYTHING every time.

What you have yet to distill is that I am making a statement. Pretty much the same statement that Mr. CA has been voicing his opinion about. He chooses a less irratating form and most likely gets better results with less expended energy. I, on the other hand, pull a full on assault, taxing my system until I can barely move my head, using every weapon available that I can locate and just generally causing smoke to come out of the rearends of little people like you.

The end result is still the goal...to be rid of the porn, freaks like me, dumb clucks like you, a more attentive staff, a clear line of direction, a forseeable future that would make us each proud of our associations together.

I remain, yours in anonymity,

Jack O'Brien




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Coffee Anon wrote:

As I've noted all along, most of these folks are all about free expression and beauty and love and harmony and all that other rot, until you dissagree with them.  Then they go into attack mode. 
CA
 




Coffee, i think if you actually used a bit more tact in your criticisms folks wouldn't go on the attack. Criticism doesn't need to be destructive to be constructive. I can see some times when you're really trying to hit specific points about the song that need help but when you preface a specific comment with sarcasm do you really help out. In the end it's our choice to accept the criticism - sarcastic or not - but still some self-control doesn't hurt anyone or the community in general.

Just some thoughts.




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Anonon

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People like Jack Ass aren't even here for the music.  It's as plain as the large pimple on his crooked shoulders, he not only wants attention, he CRAVES it, NEEDS it and can't live without it.  It's the LOOK AT ME syndrome that's always displayed by know-it-alls like him.  Have you EVER seen Whacko Jacko write something decent without prefacing or ending it with the slash of his pathetic rubber knife?  Nope, never.  Have you ever seen ANYONE who makes as many excuses as him about EVERYTHING he does?  Nope, never.  It must be a very sad existence.  We should all feel sorry for a poor lonesome bloke like that, but we don't.  He doesn't even deserve that.  By the way, his real name is John O'Brian.  He just uses Jack because it goes better with ass.

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SteveHanlon

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Coffee, here's a great example of your style:

This posted on greg tackett's song

"Oh OK, 32 ratings, when the songs on either side of yo uhave fewer than 20. SEEMS UNLIKELY. Please check Your ego at the door. Song rates about a two. CA "

Coffee, take some time and read that back to yourself. Is that really what you want to say? Is that really helpful to Greg's song?

If the song is a '2' what could he do differently to make it a 4 or a 5? Pretend you had to write a country tune like this, what would you do differently.

This is where you have to stop and ask yourself if you are serving the community at all. You certainly have a far amount of criticism about the staff here.

But my question to you is how can you improve yourself to make AW a better place and a place where song writers (like yourself) can come and improve their craft?

This goes for all of us when critiquing.

And lastly, defending some of the high count ratings here, it is well known (and pointed out by you) that some folks have to actually vote in order to see comments. So maybe things aren't what they seem.

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Coffee Anon

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Hi Steve-
As one of the few people actually taking the time to offer any feedback at all in the Country/Bluegrass genre, I take particular offense to your comments regarding my offensive comments. I took a moment to listen, and I took a moment to give my response.

The song was marginal, I had no constructive feedback to offer other than it seemed unlikely that folks would intentionally ignore the songs on either side of it, and therefore it appeared that the rating was either being pumped or dumped. (ask Jack about rating dumping, works both ways) It was 1978 country disco, I don’t care what anyone says Stella in her red dress on Saturday night is just about as cliché as you can get in country music (or rock, or soul, you get the drift). Do I need to elaborate on that point? What constructivism could I add there? I'm not competing with it either; I’ve got nothing out there currently. Just from the point of view of total objectivity, it "seems unlikely" doesn't it? But I didn't say, "It sucked." So what's the problem? I’ll point out that Donna, one of the other mentions this week got a grand total of twelve listens to her song. TWELVE. Two of those were me. She got two comments, one was this bit of helpful humanistic drivel (I’m attributing it to you or RR who is generally sentimental and caring):

Song critiques aside for a moment, you are definitely one person who is using music in One of the best ways possible and I applaud you for that. Among other reasons I'm sure, I can see that you use it for comfort, to question, as an emotional release and best of all, as a good friend. Also, I have seen your songs bashed mercilessly and still you keep coming back. This shows a depth of character that many could learn from here. I know this comment is a little unusual and maybe even a little sappy, but I wanted to say it. Despite the fact that you do not have great recording equipment for the time being, your emotion and sense of connection with your songs is coming through loud and clear. Despite the fact that your songs may not get great reviews, you own them, wear them, in a very special way. This is using music in its most powerful form. Congratulations.

Is the whole thing just a lazy-susan of mentioning everyone once in a while (as I was previously mentioned and so were you just to keep us coming back? Are you listening to this stuff Steve?

Also you mention my “Style:” as though I have only one mode of commenting on songs. Wrong again Steve. Here’s some drivel of my own:

Nice vocal considering the recording circumstances. I'm wondering now what you could do with a producer (and a compressor.) I didn't necessarily follow the song, but I tried. Getting better Donna, sang like yourself for a change which was a big improvement. Just be yourself. CA

Or maybe this one isn’t constructive enough for you:

OK Donna-Here we go. No reason for this song to be this darn slow. I have a decent attention span, but you're losing me between lines. Pick up the pace, back up from the mic. "Stone made bed" is not something the average person would say, maybe a bed made of stone, but not a stone made bed. I have a wooden bed, not wood made bed, for example. So the hook is weak, and that also hurts the song. I like hymns and Christian music, by the way, so the sentiment expressed is not missed. Just trying to be helpful. CA two flames.

Or this:
This sounds like it might be a classic even in your collection. It's pretty, I'm guessing you wrote this a long time ago and even though the sweet sentiment could carry through to today, it sounds old, if that makes sense. I think people are too harsh now to appreciate it. this coming from me! Three flames- hey update it if you're up to it, i think it would sound great redone in a little more contemporary approach. Coffee Anon

I don’t see any sarcasm there. I was totally honest. Lots of Donna’s stuff Is very hard to listen to I’m convinced my speakers are being damaged every time. But I’m listening!

Look man, these ratings things don't happen on their own. It’s time consuming, and frankly I get at bit frustrated at ratings massaging. I’m vested here based on the amount of time I log with it and it bugs me when people pleasure themselves in public.

In my world it's OK to point out the inconsistencies as I see them. You're the featured artist though, and have been for what, eight weeks? 12 weeks? (WM knows I’m not that good at math) So what do I know? I defer to your featured-ness. (That’s me pointing out an inconsistency again, by the way)

820/BC/WM/BM/NBA/NFL/Jackie O/Anon/MSNBC/lmfao/Cialisguy/spam/BRB/XYZ-PDQ----I concede, finally, that logins are required to keep it real. Steve has a point-it shouldn't be up to me to do that. I accept the brow beating I deserved for saying so in the wrong place, on a song rating page, where I should have just kept my mouth shut like he so many other people, or just said the song sucked like 820 does (just kidding 820). If an artist wants to massage his or her ratings in the current format, I guess I’ll just have to pretend I don’t notice and flame them a bunch of anonymous 1’s with comments like “WOW! five flames” and “Great Job, five flaming flames” until you get it fixed.

And I’ll sign them all Steve Hanlon. Oh, wait, nobody would buy that, he doesn’t own up to his comments.

So Steve, what’s your point? You can attack me because I say what I think and then give an avenue for reproach? Get over yourself.

CA





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Anonon

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Sorry Coffee Cakes, I'm with Steve.  Your comments often ooze with jealousy and sarcasm.  Just because a couple of them don't doesn't help your position any.  No, you're not the only one, but the guy was just trying to offer some helpful advise to someone who could really use a little counselling.  i have no idea what troubles have befallen you in your life but just like Jacko, you have a bee stuck in the sphincter valve over something.  Hey, I'm not condemning you for it, we all have "issues", but just because someone tries to help you doesn't mean you have to try and shoot the bee out at him too.  Maybe if you learned to accept kindness you might learn how to give it.  Oh quit shaking your head, you know I'm right.


For example, you said "I had no constructive feedback to offer"  and then said "It was 1978 country disco, I don’t care what anyone says Stella in her red dress on Saturday night is just about as cliché as you can get in country music" which might be considered constructive critisism after all.  Why didn't you say that in your review instead?  I know why, because not having any constructive critisism is not the real reason, it was the bee in the sphincter that got you.  You also complain about ratings as being time consuming yet you seem to have lots of time to spend in the forums.  Again, not quite the truth.  The bee is buzzing.


This one really got me laughing: "And I’ll sign them all Steve Hanlon. Oh, wait, nobody would buy that, he doesn’t own up to his comments."  Let me see here, Coffee Anon, hmmm...  THIS is owning up to comments?  Give me a break!  That reminds me of Jack also by the way.  I couldn't count the number of times he has rambled on about signing names as opposed to anonymity, proudly spitting out that HE always signs his name, HE is not one of those who uses anonymity, then he tells us Jack is not his real name!  Idiocy at its finest.  See the similarity?  No wonder you two are in love.  You share a common confusion, and maybe even the same bee?  Try to get the point Coffee, it'll do you good.



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Anonon wrote:

...I couldn't count the number of times he has rambled on about signing names as opposed to anonymity, proudly spitting out that HE always signs his name, HE is not one of those who uses anonymity, then he tells us Jack is not his real name!  



I bet you >can< count the number of times...Zero. What is funny is that my name isn't Jack, John, Jacko, Anon, AA...et. al....but still you chase me around like you will win a prize if ever the illusive target is caught.

Talk about a freak!

I get pissy about some dumbass tune....but I don't chase mo-fos around the damn playground:)

You are sick my friend...S.I.C.K...sick.




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Anonon

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There you go trying to build yourself up again.  As if anyone would waste their time following YOU around.  Not a chance.  I've never written anything about you before this thread so it looks like more people are seeing the real you than you think, John.  Yes folks, it IS John.

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Anonon

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Oh yes, the number of times happens to be 18.

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