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what about these lyrics?


We went to Thailand last winter for vacation. There, we met a woman that was in the Tsunami and lost her husband. She described how she felt, the crash of the waves, the loss of her "other half". The lyrics pretty much wrote themselves.

Any comments are very welcome...
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Lost

It seems no matter what I do
I miss you more each day
Tears come at unexpected times
And I wander in a daze
The life we planned, together
I just cant do it all alone
The house we built is still standing
But somehow its not a home.

They say the water cleanses
And they also claim the fire
But no matter how I focus
I can not quinch the desire
To feel you walk beside me
And to want to laugh again
At all the silly moments
spent with my best friend

I know I have to carry on
And do my very best
The days and years keep ticking by
Like the heartbeat in my chest
But I wish that I could hold you
Or to feel you touch me soft
One half of me is missing
And now the other half is lost

lost....

©2006 Lance Harrison

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Original American Southern Roots & Blues
Lance & Donna
Lance Harrison Band

http://www.lance-n-donna.com
http://myspace.com/lancedonna
http://myspace.com/lanceharrisonband

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BC


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Well done. Definitely captures the feeling.

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