As a follow up to our last winner "Home Again"...
I just put up another song from the Lance Harrison Band called "Eliza Jane". It's a rock ballad of sorts.
I'm always interested in constructive critism but, like all of us appreciate any worthy praises as well!
Below are the lyrics.

Eilza Jane

Poor ol little Eilza Jane
Didnt have the sense
to get out of the rain
Her heart throb
was Jimmy Bob
A boy so smart
he could keep a job
She smiled at him
an he turned red
Asked her to marry
and they did
Yes, somehow
they made their way
Pushin through day to day

Now Jimmy Bob
had an idea, he did
So Eliza Jane
had a couple of kids
It wasnt easy
they worked real hard
Rented a house
with a tree in the yard
She smiled at him
He smiled at her
and time moved on
like a colorful blur
Loving and laughing
Saddness and tears
They held each other
through the passing years

Then it came
one passed away
The other sat there
Nothing left to say

And so it goes
The circle of life
The common story
Of a man and a wife
Since the beginning
It goes on still
One after another
And it always will

©2006 Lance Harrison

-- Edited by lanzdona at 16:11, 2007-08-24