woud appreciate

SharonO · Senior Member

woud appreciate

jeff · Member

Let me tell ya...

Late last night, in the midst of a good dream
I was startled awake, shaken by something
It might have been, ..Long Rollin' Thunder,
But it sounded like a Harley.............To Me .

I hope this helps.
( Great song my friend )

.......= drawn out ( pause, silence, or note sustained )

You could add the sound effects of either ---Thunder or Harley.
At the point of mention ( which would be ..."Long Rollin' Thunder")
or , as a fade at the end.

( You write this chorus right, and it could be a Harley Commercial - jingle or slogan)

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SharonO · Senior Member

Thank you, Jeff; as always, very thoughtul and interesting perspective, and I appreciate your taking the time to convey these ideas to me.