Happy bones, honestly I had no idea you even existed before you posted this. So in a good way, I got to discover your sound.
I read the comments and what to say other than keep going!
My opinion, for whatever it may be worth, is you got a lot going with your voice. That is the really strong part of your compositions.
I've only fully listened to two of your tunes and made comments on just those (mostly because I burn out on making comments really fast).
I'm not sure how limited you are with the sounds at your place, but if you can somehow get access or hook up with someone who can help fully arrange your music, I don't see why you couldn't have something really strong going for you. Or, you start really listening to music on a deeper structural level and figuring out why you like the music you do. What's specifically happening in it? What keeps your attention about it?
Your music kind of screams to me 'artist in need of a producer'. And I don't mean that in any negative way at all. It seems you may need someone to help frame your sound more. And I know 'frame' may sound like an anti-creative thing but I think it could help. If 'producer' is the wrong word than I could also say 'structure'. Even if you like music that seems to float to different places, I think that kind of music is best when it still has some foundation of structure under it. But you camouflage it with variation in instruments or effects or even just surpise pauses or surprise sections like a 'C' section or a 'D' section ( a bridge of a bridge so to speak.)
Now lyrically, I'm not the man to help. I almost never tune into lyrics. I tune into the sounds the words make only. So whther or not the stories make sense or not or this is word or that word is cliche...blah blah blah, I can't really help.
Look for more comments on your other tunes as the days go by. I'll try and help where I can. But take it with a grain of salt, it just my 2 cents.
Had to pick up on this (used to think I was the only one). I suppose most people hear the lyrics first and foremost, but for some of us the sound is predominant, and the voice is basically just the lead instrument. Anyway, only wanted to be enlightening here. We're all different! Peace, Love, and God Bless everyone, even the "mean people"!
Bones! Dont get discouraged we need the mean people to make us better! It's kind of a balancing force in this industry! I know some people can be absolute asses but if you really love what you do F them and do what you do! Do what ever you have to to make yourself better and those mean people will start to disappear!!!!
You thank thare mean to us go to my song Devil Go Home and look at what some one said a bout Jesus. if thay talk that way about him then we dont have a prayer, are so they thank. Also it could be that they think thay can sway the juges away frome your song, thus giveing them a better chance
