Don't be feelin' so alone,use me til you can go on, never doubt what I can do,can't live if there's no me & you, as long as we're never apart,no love can ever break a heart.
Love should be loved,so many ways, Our hopes everlasting,everyday, (bridge) Vines intwined,become the same, Even the slightest sigh,will be heard,from miles away.
Share to happily come home,don't let me tell you more than once, only I can turn it around some,nothin' can keep me & you from, not as long as we're together,all love can simply last forever.
(bridge again) Even the slightest cry,will be heard, from miles away..
You know that Nich Lachey song that begins, "Watch my life pass me by in the rearview mirror"? I'm always thinking to myself, if you're looking through the rearview mirror, your life isn't passing you by . . . it's behind you . . . idiot.
The first verse has lines that seem to blatantly contradict one another . . . "use me 'til you can go on" and "as long as we're never apart, no love can ever break a heart" Do you want him to use you and then move on, or do you long to never be apart from him? Honestly, it reminds me of some of the young ladies I used to know who were always telling their boyfriends one thing one day and something totally different the next. It comes off as annoying.
I personally like how you worded the line "nothin' can keep me & you from", but I think some people might cringe at that as a lame attempt to create a rhyme.
HOWEVER, the ideas you've got are nice, and the change from "even the slightest sigh" to "even the slightest cry" is a nice image.
Overall, it needs work, but it's not hopeless. Keep working on it.
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Take Care . God Bless . Rock On . Zach . The TuneHead
